on 2007-07-06 04:51 pm (UTC)
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Haha! It's stopwatch!porn. WOOT.

That's one of the rules, and Ianto likes rules, even though his job often requires him to break them.

Hah! I like that line.

I really enjoyed your presentation of rules throughout the story and the Ianto perspective.

He also knows that much more of this and he'll come before he identifies the object, and tries reciting the team's phone numbers in his head, the different network passwords, the alphabet backwards, anything to slow Jack down, but oh god there's another finger inside him now, and he cries out, nearly there.

That's pretty hot. I love repression and being in a character's headspace when they hold themselves back.

This is one of the best stopwatch!porn that I've read. Write more!
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