Oh, nice one. It took me a while to come up with uses for the stopwatch, after seeing that episode. Clearly, I lack imagination. It's a bit of a pity that the show didn't let us see more about the beginnings of their relationship; it's nice to see its suddenness acknowledged here. I'm rather fond of Ianto and you've got the little quirks here that make it him and not just A Guy Jack Is Having Sex With.
There are consequences for breaking the rules, and sometimes Ianto thinks that he might fail one day, accidentally on purpose, just to see how far Jack will go in punishing him.
Meep. Also, the entire There are more questions paragraph is great.
Two minor questions: Ianto asks the same question twice? And that's okay? And how can he tell that Jack's grinning, looking at the watch, etc, at the end, before he removes the blindfold? It feels like he's noticing it more than surmising.
In conclusion, you are going to post that other thing you mentioned writing, right? And maybe possibly consider continuing after that?
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on 2007-07-06 11:12 pm (UTC)There are consequences for breaking the rules, and sometimes Ianto thinks that he might fail one day, accidentally on purpose, just to see how far Jack will go in punishing him.
Meep. Also, the entire There are more questions paragraph is great.
Two minor questions: Ianto asks the same question twice? And that's okay? And how can he tell that Jack's grinning, looking at the watch, etc, at the end, before he removes the blindfold? It feels like he's noticing it more than surmising.
In conclusion, you are going to post that other thing you mentioned writing, right? And maybe possibly consider continuing after that?