I decided to leave the POV issue in there as a reminder to myself to be more careful next time. After 16 years of not writing fiction, it's not surprising that this kind of problem cropped up. And compared to the mistake I caught long before I sent this to you -- one in which (blindfolded) Ianto saw what Jack was doing -- it's really not so bad.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2007-07-08 03:29 pm (UTC)