I have to count myself among those left emotionally dead inside by GitFp [no, I won't discuss why and you can't make me, so there] but this fic really seemed genuinely possible and real to me. So, in short, well done! Not to sound patronising at all, but I could believe her motivation and her responses and I could totally believe Ten's initial awkwardness and then his - ah - exceptional talents in the relevant department...............Oh hell <>THUD!!!<>
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ninetydegrees
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on 2007-11-18 08:03 am (UTC)