Very nice. I like that there pretty much a choice at the end. I mean, while TenII/Rose were thrust into that life (or at least Rose was) unknowingly, she/they choose(s) it now.
And I'm glad he at least got a lecture (I think he might have needed that slap, but it's only been a few days for him, so I'm a bit glad she went easy on him).
The pr0n was lovely, i particularly like the shadows of jealousy and the hot Doctor on Doctor action. ;)
Also, the goodbyes. Working in the coral and a really good hug too. Great work!
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on 2008-09-05 08:15 pm (UTC)And I'm glad he at least got a lecture (I think he might have needed that slap, but it's only been a few days for him, so I'm a bit glad she went easy on him).
The pr0n was lovely, i particularly like the shadows of jealousy and the hot Doctor on Doctor action. ;)
Also, the goodbyes. Working in the coral and a really good hug too. Great work!