Yay. I liked this a lot; you have a very efficient but lovely flow in your writing. I know you're picky about wasted words and I can use a word like "efficient" and have you know it's a compliment. :)
The interaction between the two Doctors is very good. For whatever it's worth -- they both know they're the Doctor. The TARDIS does belong to both of them. And I like your take on the TARDIS coral much better than the deleted scene.
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on 2008-09-06 01:35 am (UTC)The interaction between the two Doctors is very good. For whatever it's worth -- they both know they're the Doctor. The TARDIS does belong to both of them. And I like your take on the TARDIS coral much better than the deleted scene.