Thank you so much! Like I said in another comment, I was really surprised at how well the cliché worked for this pairing.
Funny that you called out that first paragraph – it's one of the last things I added to the story, entirely because I thought the sex scene wasn't long enough. It was a total throwaway! But obviously, it worked out just fine ;-)
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on 2008-11-21 11:21 pm (UTC)Funny that you called out that first paragraph – it's one of the last things I added to the story, entirely because I thought the sex scene wasn't long enough. It was a total throwaway! But obviously, it worked out just fine ;-)