I think in most of the Ten/Ten/Rose stories I really like, when it all first starts to go down like that Rose is always a little bit surprised at how incredibly hot it is to watch, because it's not just any two random guys kissing, it's two of the same guy, both of whom she's in love with, kissing.
Well, like I said, that was my intention with that part of the scene, but I think what I wrote might be too easily misinterpreted, and I should have made that scene clearer.
I don't think I go overboard with the talking, but now I'm paranoid.
I don't recall that you do, either, but I'd need to re-read some of your stuff looking specifically for that to be sure. If you're doing it, you're not doing it in any of the obvious ways that annoy me, like the authors who seem to think Ten is a 15-year-old girl who writes love poetry and cries about his poor, lost Rose while sniffing the lingering scent of her strawberry-banana shampoo on her dusky pink pillow.
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on 2009-03-10 11:22 pm (UTC)Well, like I said, that was my intention with that part of the scene, but I think what I wrote might be too easily misinterpreted, and I should have made that scene clearer.
I don't think I go overboard with the talking, but now I'm paranoid.
I don't recall that you do, either, but I'd need to re-read some of your stuff looking specifically for that to be sure. If you're doing it, you're not doing it in any of the obvious ways that annoy me, like the authors who seem to think Ten is a 15-year-old girl who writes love poetry and cries about his poor, lost Rose while sniffing the lingering scent of her strawberry-banana shampoo on her dusky pink pillow.