Now I really wish you had posted this earlier, because it's everything I could ever want in a Ten/River fic.
I love the way Ten struggles with the TARDIS. The latter's presence is subtle yet tangible, and the whole thing seems very much like something that could happen in canon. You describe the growing sense of dread and Ten's fears so well. I think my favourite bit is when he almost runs into Eleven.
Your River is wonderful and kick-ass. Your Ten/River is a perfect combination of sexy and sweet. I love this!
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on 2009-12-24 11:16 pm (UTC)I love the way Ten struggles with the TARDIS. The latter's presence is subtle yet tangible, and the whole thing seems very much like something that could happen in canon. You describe the growing sense of dread and Ten's fears so well. I think my favourite bit is when he almost runs into Eleven.
Your River is wonderful and kick-ass. Your Ten/River is a perfect combination of sexy and sweet. I love this!