I wasn't sure how you were going to make it work, but you did. I particularly love the thought that you put into the Flesh's state of consciousness.
"This is relaxed. I've made myself a lovely breakfast, I'm three hundred pages into a tawdry serial killer novel I'm completely appalled to be enjoying, and now I'm asking you to observe some simple boundaries that will enable me to continue to be relaxed."
And you've captured not just renders voice, but her and asked clickable honesty here. Brava!
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ninetydegrees
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on 2011-08-15 01:45 am (UTC)"This is relaxed. I've made myself a lovely breakfast, I'm three hundred pages into a tawdry serial killer novel I'm completely appalled to be enjoying, and now I'm asking you to observe some simple boundaries that will enable me to continue to be relaxed."
And you've captured not just renders voice, but her and asked clickable honesty here. Brava!