That fic commentary meme thingy

I've been incredibly busy at work lately, and though I really should be concentrating on a massive site map right now, I'm kind of bored. Thus, the fic commentary meme that's been making its rounds again:

Request any fic of mine and I will provide you with a commentary/annotations, like a DVD extra.

Fic list available here or on Teaspoon.

Fic Commentary: You That Way; We This Way

By request for papilio_luna, commentary for "You That Way; We This Way."

( Commentary, after the cut. )

Fic Commentary: Thirteen Steps

elliptic_eye asked for commentary on "Thirteen Steps," so off I went into my fanfic folder to find previous drafts of the story. Instead, I found a document with notes I'd made to myself about each drabble – essentially, the DVD commentary Elliptic had asked me to write. Weird.

( The oddly forward-thinking commentary, after the cut. )

Fic Commentary: The Replacement

nostalgia_lj requested commentary for any story of mine, so I picked one I knew she'd enjoyed.

( Commentary, after the cut. )